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Monday, 16 March 2015

Quick write 2

Once there was a girl. She was in the middle of daily jog. But all off a sudden some park bench staring at her like a eagle stalking her pray. she sat down and read a book how to do magic see said something and poof she had vanished into thin air she sat their body less but her clothing stayed there in perfect form people walked past and called the authority's police came news channels came with their cameras. breaking news woman's clothing with talking powers they didn't know that a woman was inside the clothing so she stood up everyone took shots of this thing (or woman) but all of a sudden she started repapering everyone fainted. She started her jog again.

My goal was to improve my use of personification and show not tell      

1 comment:

  1. Great writing kaleb i can picture a great seen in my head well done:-D